Good art but imo hard to follow who is part of which ¨team¨, a little bit of backstory would be nice (why are they going there and what for, do they know the people there?), and the pages can be hard to read in the correct text bubble order. (i wouldnt be able to make this tho)
Good art but imo hard to follow who is part of which ¨team¨, a little bit of backstory would be nice (why are they going there and what for, do they know the people there?), and the pages can be hard to read in the correct text bubble order. (i wouldnt be able to make this tho)