in some sex scenes you had poor angle choice but this seemed pretty good regardless. the story was displayed well enough in the s for me to "get it" (even tho, i dont speak the language this comic is translated in) . maybe work on coloring. while it looks fine and i like it, it doesnt really bring life to the figures. they look kinda dull. (especially in scenes where light and shadow should have more effect)Â
sorry if i seem preachy. lol i have the tendency to just read stuff for fun after i do what most ppl come to this site for....
in some sex scenes you had poor angle choice but this seemed pretty good regardless. the story was displayed well enough in the s for me to "get it" (even tho, i dont speak the language this comic is translated in) . maybe work on coloring. while it looks fine and i like it, it doesnt really bring life to the figures. they look kinda dull. (especially in scenes where light and shadow should have more effect)Â
sorry if i seem preachy. lol i have the tendency to just read stuff for fun after i do what most ppl come to this site for....